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Yokajoker

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Your art styles getting a lot more refined and I love it

Wriizzy responds:

Thanks, Man!

This is actually really cool! You've improved on anatomy a lot and once again your expressions are perfect

I absolutely love this, if I could nit pick at anything it would have to be that the left eyebrow seems to be a little small

I really love everything in this but the shoulders are just a little too robust

The character design is alright but it is a little thin in the arms, and the word arcade looks a little messy, I would suggest maybe having a look at these https://wildlyartistic.files.wordpress.com/2012/11/screen-shot-2012-11-29-at-5-43-04-pm.png?w=584
It's perspective, it's an easier way of making things look a lot more 3D, including letters and words

omithealien responds:

Oh a lot more 3D?

Has he been naughty or nice?

Ok if your going to be an animator here you're going to need a lot of help for starters the body proportions I mean I can't tell what her arms are coming out of is it her stomach is it her torso and if so why is her shirt all the way up top she doesn't have a second arm it's more of just a big round lump look fact of the matter you need to practice and if you want to be proffesional then you need to get proportions down think of it like this just draw outlines for where the body is like a stick man then just draw around it so you know where all of the body parts for the character is you just really need to get some work done on this and by the way don't use Ms paint it looks sloppy

So is this concept for your next animation?

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